ICW 11-15

The difference between my paper from Thursday and my paper today is that I was able to extend some of my perspectives to lengthen it.  Also, I realized that I never defined my thesis statement so I made sure to include it in my paper.  The analysis of the sample essay was helpful in understanding the assignment, but not very helpful in actually writing it.  I was not able to open the file that contained my peer review comments.  The strongest element of my paper is probably the content because the sources I found were strong.  I'm concerned that my paper does not meet the length requirement.